Impossible Dream
Women´s discrimination has been of the most popular problems in our society. From ancient times Mexican women have lived in a society where they have suffered discrimination, deprivation and the denial of their human rights based on their gender. In Mexico, women often suffer discrimination whether for the political, social and cultural status.
Traditionally women have relapsed in housework, and the brought up their kids, for this reason many people think that it is very important to have a women at home. According to INEGI in the National survey exists 19.4 millions of home where a women are the head of the house; however it could not make fairness in the allocations at home between women and men, because society continue think the men have to have the house control. Meanwhile in our days in Mexican households the women´s discrimination continues, although society says that equity exists nowadays.
Another aspect is jobs. Most of the times when jobs are offered in a factory the women have few opportunities to get an important position. Nowadays many women have gotten this opportunity; however their salaries in 30% lower than men. According to CNN Money in 2006 there were only 10 women running fortune 500 companies and only 20 in the top 1000. This happens because it is still believed that women do no have the necessary skill for lead companies even the country.
In Mexican society women´s discrimination has been decrease; but the problems continue every day, because the society still believes that the women´s role is at home. However according to Apún Salinas Paola María women have demonstrated sufficient capacity to act on social and economic life and achieving excellent results, arising from the decision-making in the political sector in economic entities and the important contributions in science and technology.
As a conclusion, although the society believe that women and men have equity, including opportunities and obligation in society, family or citizen, however some places continue discrimination against women, in jobs and home, but is necessary mention that in many aspects the women is stronger than men, for example a women can have a babies, they have the capacity to lead a company or the country, however we continue live in a society where the equity of gender is not strong.
I really like your essays because all of them have a lot of coherence and are well organized. In the first paragraph, you forgot to write the word one because you wrote women's discrimination has been of the most..... and I think that it is better to write since instead of from.
ResponderEliminarIn the second pararaph, you have some finger mistakes because you forgot to write some letters in some words for example you wrote the instead of they. And also, you can write continue thinking instead of continue think.
In the fourth paragraph, you should write has been decreasing or has decresed instead of has been decrese,
But in general, it is a good essay.
Well, Aimee I liked your essay you are defending your point of view and you are using good arguments based on evidences, but I agree with Noe you have some spelling mistakes.
ResponderEliminarIn general, your essay is well organized and structured
Well Done... u_u